Because of you I went and read that entire story this past week! I am soooo in love with Laurent's eyes in this one. They have that cold, cunning feeling that is just perfect. And even though you used a reference for this I still adore how you captured the pose, it's beautiful.
The story is a good one for me, hits all my kinks, and it isn't something I'd ever find at the Barnes & Noble table. Thank god for the internet!